As I place my foot onto the first stair, the silence is broken by the gentle echo of Aliza's voice, her words threading through the still air. "Godwin, you had a great presentation and used your time wisely, but you should have discussed the statistics alongside each pull factor instead of separately." The sunlight seems to spotlight me, illuminating both my relief at her praise and the sharp awareness of where my organization could be improved. I pause, gripping the wooden railing, acknowledging that my communicative task was strong, but there is more to learn.
Donatus's voice rises next, clear and analytical, echoing in the hush. "You had a vivid description of your task, but you struggled a little with the introduction and repeated some points. Also, you went over the time limit by fifteen seconds." I nod to myself, replaying the opening lines in my mind and noticing the uneven rhythm at the start. My grammar was mostly good, but small slips had made the flow feel jagged, reminding me that poise comes with practice.
Aliza's earlier words about pronunciation come back to me, calm and encouraging. "Your pronunciation was good, and you spoke clearly throughout." Her affirmation echoes, steady and warm, bolstering my confidence in my phonetics. I feel steadier, my shoulders relaxing as I realize that some foundations are already strong.
Again, Aliza's voice is present, this time tinged with delight. "You used active vocabulary, as recommended!" The words spark a quiet pride within me, and I recall the effort to choose academic, topic-appropriate language. The vibrant hues on the wall seem to celebrate this achievement, and I allow myself a brief, satisfied smile.
Raihanullah and Professor Vera's feedback weaves together, their tones supportive yet honest. "Your slides were self-explanatory, and you didn't read from them — you spoke naturally!" "You engaged well with your audience and made your points clear without relying on reading." Their praise fills the space, and I realize that my presentation style has matured. The hallway feels wider, more open, as if inviting me to step confidently into the next challenge.
Professor Vera and the class join together in a chorus of support, their collective voices ringing with sincerity. "Despite small faults, Godwin, you did a great job this time! You managed to cover gaps during your presentation. You've really improved!" The warmth of their words settles around me like a soft cloak. Reaching the bottom, I stand taller, filled with gratitude and determination, knowing each step and every voice has shaped me. I carry their feedback forward, certain that my next climb will be even stronger.
