🎞️ REEL SCRIPT #1 (30–40 sec)
✅ On-Screen Text Hook (0:00 – 0:02)
TEXT:
“I studied 6 hours… and still forgot everything.”
(Big bold text, center)
🎥 Visual:
Close-up shot of a notebook + pen, clock ticking.
🎧 Sound:
Soft emotional piano / lofi (slow start)
🎬 Scene 1: “The effort” (0:02 – 0:08)
🎥 Visual montage (quick cuts):
Books opening
Highlighting lines
Writing notes fast
Coffee cup
Clock shows late night
Eyes tired but still studying
TEXT (small at bottom):
“Today I actually studied seriously…”
🎙️ Voiceover:
“I gave my full effort today… like genuinely.”
🎬 Scene 2: “The moment of truth” (0:08 – 0:15)
🎥 Visual: Exam paper / mock test sheet opens
Hand pauses
Blank stare
Slow zoom on face (confused)
TEXT (center):
“Then I tried recalling…”
“Blank.”
🎙️ Voiceover:
“But when I tried to recall… my mind went completely blank.”
🎧 Sound:
Music dips slightly (tiny silence effect)
🎬 Scene 3: “Emotional hit” (0:15 – 0:22)
🎥 Visual:
Hand closes book slowly
Head down on desk
Phone screen lights up (2:00 AM)
Dark room aesthetic shot
TEXT (center):
“Not because I’m weak…”
“Because I didn’t revise.”
🎙️ Voiceover (emotional):
“And that hurts… because it’s not like I didn’t study…
I did.
I just didn’t revise.”
🎬 Scene 4: “The real problem” (0:22 – 0:28)
🎥 Visual: Notebook pages flipping fast
Too many topics
A messy list
Calendar with crossed dates
TEXT:
“Revision isn’t hard…”
“Tracking revision is.”
🎙️ Voiceover:
“Revision isn’t hard…
What’s hard is knowing what to revise… and when.”
🎬 Scene 5: “Hope + Solution” (0:28 – 0:36)
🎥 Visual: Clean minimal checklist
Simple timeline animation
Phone reminder notification aesthetic shot
TEXT (big):
“Fix this…”
“and you fix your results.”
🎙️ Voiceover (strong but calm):
“If you can just build a small revision system…
your results will change without studying extra hours.”
🎯 Ending CTA (0:36 – 0:40)
🎥 Visual:
Close notebook → deep breath → sit back again (restart vibe)
TEXT:
“Want my revision cycle?”
Comment ‘REVISION’ 👇
🎙️ Voiceover:
“Want the revision cycle I’m using? Comment ‘REVISION’… I’ll share it.”
🎧 Sound:
Music lifts slightly (hopeful ending)
🎬 Caption (Copy-Paste)
Studying is not the problem. Forgetting is.
And forgetting happens when revision has no system.
Comment REVISION and I’ll share the cycle that fixes this. ✅📌
🔥 Editing Notes (to make it addictive)
✅ Use fast cuts in first 8 seconds
✅ Use slow zoom during “Blank.” moment
✅ Add a 0.3 sec silence at the blank moment (hits hard)
✅ Keep text minimal, big, emotional
✅ Use warm aesthetic color grading (not too dark)
